scarletsquig
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« on: November 12, 2011, 12:38:30 am » |
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Forgefather Army List, page 2, Fire Wyrm.
Change "instead than the listed price." to "instead of the listed price."
Page 7, BFGs
Change "Ballistic Firepower Guarantor" to "Ballistic Firepower Generator".. or even, better, remove it altogether and replace it with "Heavy Weapons".
At the moment, it's a bad in-joke, supported by a bad alternate name which has then been spelt wrong.
Page 13, Jump Troops.
Replace "but still cannot land on top of them", with "but cannot land on top of them".. the "still" word doesn't make sense when applied to difficult terrain since normal units can in fact finish their move on top of difficult terrain.
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« Last Edit: November 12, 2011, 04:43:48 am by scarletsquig »
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